lonely were the paths i lived by , world came and passed by aside . . .
living their own dreams , my shelter is the sky with creams !
good observer though i am , had watched changing faces merely for the sake of price !
love seems to be in everyone's soul , true ones put their faith in boul's
this is how a road seems to be , making travel everyone's faith to a destiny unseen....
respecting love doesn't mean to play with it .. everyone's having a heart like a gem it could be.
parents are not just worth for swears indeed...paying tribute to their respect is all they need..
lonely were the paths i lived by , world came an passed by aside . . .
-mambogination
Lovely lines buddy...
ReplyDeleteLoved reading 'em :)
mambogination \m/ Cheerz! ;)
its a good start. my advice- just focus on the core topic. each stanza deviates,which should come back on the track more or less in the end.
ReplyDeletehola hola neva seen a change like this...
ReplyDeletekeep it up :)
thanks . .
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